Ride

RIDE
She drove through the rains.
Hair  of  hers on my face
seduct me for long.
Holding her in my arms 
felt love for long.
Pouring rain gave sensucs
feel to lip -lock.
Entering the temple sent feeling 
to make her mine.
She talked more about love
and made my heart pump hard.
She turned back and felt her breathe 
sent shake in my spine bit far .
Journey ended with chocolate mouses
in our mouth from her to mine.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
August 17, 2011 at 9:03 AM
Thank you for sharing your creative poetry with us Saurabh. I enjoyed reading it this morning. I will be back another time to read more. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
August 16, 2011 at 10:04 PM
What a passionate feelings worded so well with images, Saurabh
Nair Avatar
August 16, 2011 at 8:18 PM
thanks for your comments,,good write, jag
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