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Ride

RIDE
She drove through the rains.
Hair  of  hers on my face
seduct me for long.
Holding her in my arms 
felt love for long.
Pouring rain gave sensucs
feel to lip -lock.
Entering the temple sent feeling 
to make her mine.
She talked more about love
and made my heart pump hard.
She turned back and felt her breathe 
sent shake in my spine bit far .
Journey ended with chocolate mouses
in our mouth from her to mine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/17/2011 9:03:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your creative poetry with us Saurabh. I enjoyed reading it this morning. I will be back another time to read more. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/16/2011 10:04:00 PM
What a passionate feelings worded so well with images, Saurabh
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Date: 8/16/2011 8:18:00 PM
thanks for your comments,,good write, jag
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