Ricky Danced with Anyone

Ricky danced in the rain
without shame.
Who could blame him,
this character, chicken.
Oh the splash he made
with his fame.
Oh the waddle and pain.
his hips and his knees
aching, but with a quack
he made a splash,
and for a little while
he forgot
that a little rain
erased the pain.
So he put on
the ritz -
orange webbed boots
and a yellow
fisherman’s hat.
Anyone danced in the rain
with pomp and circumstance,
splashing full on throttle,
being the fool,
forgetting for a time
the troubles of the mind;
and remembering
that a little rain
never hurt
Anyone.

…and he sang this song:

Nothing wrong with my waddle
All my pain is gone as I dance
My hips and my knees a model
I’ll make a splash as I prance

Forget all your troubles and twist
Do the chicken splash with me
If chair has wheels, use your wrist
full throttle and burn rubber carefree

A little rain, a little trouble - forget
Splash! Splash! Splash! Splash!
A teeter and totter of feet, offset
Splash, splash, with no backlash

Nothing wrong with my waddle
I’ve nothing to lose with a rain dance
Except the pain-in-my-sole toddle
Splash! Splash! Take a chance
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Crandall Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 1:21 PM
Hurray for Ricky! Here at the retirement community, folks in all kinds of shape, really cut a rug, and they enjoy it, I think, more than kids. Great poem. Ever heard the Tom Waits song, A Little Rain? Scratch that comment, it's pretty dismal.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 7:22 PM
Sounds nice! I will have to look up the song.
Hind Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 8:53 AM
I think there's a little you in this poem. I'm thinking you're suffering from those "hips and knees aching" looking on a different side of things, using it. Good for you. I wish you relief. ....and happy days of rain! <3 Hugs!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 10:15 AM
You know what? I’m nodding my head. I don’t think I did that intentionally but there you have it…lol
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