Rickety Boat

In the pit of my stomach I feel weak 
So distant I can hardly sleep 
Walking blind on a busy street 

Emotions constantly changing on the inside 
I'm up then I'm down 
Not myself when you're around 

Distractions getting in the way 
Burying inside everything I've wanted to say 

Sinking struggling to stay afloat 
Can't stand still on this rickety boat 

Yet I find myself in pursuit of happiness 
Gaining perspective and knowledge 
Becoming easier to relax with no stress 

Dark moments eventually bring prosperity 
Through the light of Christ 
I see great times ahead of me 

To live each moment is truly a gift 
Letting go of the doubts I'm ready to shift 

To our king who saved us from sin 
I lift my hands to you to thank you again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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March 26, 2016 at 8:45 PM
wow, Love the moment, it's epic. Dennis. LINDA
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April 4, 2011 at 12:20 PM
I see you all found some inspiration while I was not at the Soup this weekend. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and will be back again soon to read more Dennis. May you have a week of good health, joy and sunshine to light up your life. Love, Carol
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