Rice

golden color shells
                                 white hidden diamonds's safe
                                      hot countries' harvest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A  Avatar
August 11, 2015 at 2:23 AM
Rice, seems to be a major harvest throughout this country. . Nice haiku, wuv -Skat-
Devnath  Avatar
August 11, 2015 at 12:15 PM
Thanks a lot for your nice comment. Loved always,bl
Lamoureux Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 8:18 AM
The sustenance of nations, a true marvel expressed with eloquence.
Devnath  Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 1:54 PM
Thanks my lovely young friend for you stopping by on my poem. Loved always,bl
Dietrich Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 4:15 PM
great imagery for rice!!
Devnath  Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 1:53 PM
Thanks my lovely smiling beautiful friend for your comment with appreciation. Loved always,bl
Allison Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 3:20 PM
brilliant imagery BL - yes even a tiny grain of rice is as precious as a diamond! hugs Jan xx7
Devnath  Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 3:56 PM
Thanks my lovely friend for your nice comment and 7. Loved always,bl
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