Rice

golden color shells white hidden diamonds's safe hot countries' harvest

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Skat A

Date: 8/11/2015 2:23:00 AM

Rice, seems to be a major harvest throughout this country. . Nice haiku, wuv -Skat-

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/11/2015 12:15:00 PM

Thanks a lot for your nice comment. Loved always,bl

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/3/2015 8:18:00 AM

The sustenance of nations, a true marvel expressed with eloquence.

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/3/2015 1:54:00 PM

Thanks my lovely young friend for you stopping by on my poem. Loved always,bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/2/2015 4:15:00 PM

great imagery for rice!!

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/3/2015 1:53:00 PM

Thanks my lovely smiling beautiful friend for your comment with appreciation. Loved always,bl

Jan Allison

Date: 8/2/2015 3:20:00 PM

brilliant imagery BL - yes even a tiny grain of rice is as precious as a diamond! hugs Jan xx7

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/2/2015 3:56:00 PM

Thanks my lovely friend for your nice comment and 7. Loved always,bl