Ribbons In the Sky

To just wake precious one day,
And see our heavens filled with ribbons in God's sky.
Flying in patterns, every which way.
Satiny and soft~ swishing, as the winds may.
A beautiful, ribbony relief for all of humankind to see. 
To uplift not only me, but more significantly...thee!


                    
             
           
               10/5/2020
                 3pm PST
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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De Beaulieu Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 12:47 PM
Hello Panagiota, a very good imagination you have.It makes me feel happy. Enjoy your day my friend.
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October 7, 2020 at 6:09 AM
Hello Panagiota, yes this poem made me feel happy. You are welcome. Hugs Darlene xxxx-oooo.
Romios Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 1:03 PM
Hello Darlene,,thank you for letting me know how it made you feel...I appreciate that Hugs, Pangie xxxooo
Krutsinger Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 7:17 AM
Your imagery is gorgeous my friend. "heavens filled with ribbons in God's sky."
Romios Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 8:49 AM
Hello, Caren! Thank you. I love that image, too)) Hugs Pangie xx
Lindley Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 6:08 AM
Stay and show what TRUE poet is my friend. Let you pen show that poetry is about giving and offering unto others. Continue on and gift us mere.. A fav..
Romios Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 8:47 AM
We both know how hard it can be to keep giving! I try, and people like you and others who commented. Keep me here. Love, Panagiota xx
James Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 3:11 AM
Love the imagery you have created, gives me such a happy floating feeling, thank you, Emilia : ) x
Romios Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 8:44 AM
I imagine them many times. Prefer ribbons to snow any day..)) Thank you, dear Emilia... Hugs, Pangie xx
Cunningham Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 6:47 PM
What a beautiful scene you have created and one that will one day be reality in the next life. Tom
Romios Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 8:41 AM
I expect the next life is beyond our expectations. I look forward to bring there, Tom. Thank you...Pangie xx
Watt Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 6:01 PM
Amen. Beautiful imagery, Pangie. Enjoyed reading this today, filling my mind with pleasant thoughts. ~ John
Romios Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 8:38 AM
Hi John... Oh, thank you for such nice words! The thought of ribbons in the sky was inspired by Stevie Wonder's song years ago, his song is just beautiful...glad it was a positive experience. Hugs Pangie cx
Watt Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 7:36 PM
I'm sorry you're feeling that way, dear one. Please don't leave, we so need your voice and your positive energy. I find comments come in waves; one day I'll receive barely any, other days a flood. But I'm here to give encouraging comments, and I know yours are always so uplifting.
Romios Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 6:15 PM
Thanks John this and Cocao Butter are both good, you seem to be the only one out of 30. 000 who thinks so, besides me. So that's two of us. I think I will start Comnenting to my own poems. Lol. I posted these at another site and the comnents are coning in THERE not HERe. Lol. Maybe I SHOULD leave? Hugs....., Pangie xxxx. I really am tired of this...not only for me.But the selfishness to Comnent..apparent here to other poets. I Post plenty. For what? Poets read here But comment? Good luck. Aggravated and not feeling well...oy!
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