Rhythm's In the Air

swaying, twisting trees
gently prodded by the wind
dancing gracefully
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Mckenzie Avatar
December 10, 2009 at 7:56 PM
Very nice imagery! Laura :)
Sheart Avatar
December 10, 2009 at 12:36 PM
A lovely visual in this Haiku! Very tender. Truly enjoyed. Keep writing! Love Light Patty
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December 10, 2009 at 10:54 AM
Beautiful Haiku,I can feel the dance..swaying sweetly..excellent work-Charma
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