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Rhythmic Refrains

Musical notes in sweet refrain Sentimental rhythms soothe the soul Nostalgic song in hearts remain Musical notes in sweet refrain Rhapsody of joy to attain Sing along as the lyrics roll Musical notes in sweet refrain Sentimental rhythms soothe the soul 11-4-2024

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/5/2024 12:51:00 AM

This is certainly a fave for me my friend, rhythmic rhyme is always good and especially so in this terrific Triolet you have so awesomely created. Well penned, blessings, Jennifer.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/11/2024 2:42:00 AM

- Beautifully described, Joseph :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/10/2024 8:58:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this one today. I am reminded of the song that says, I Like That Old Time Rock and Roll, for some reason. Thanks for sharing. I am sure it must be for a contest, if so, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 11/9/2024 7:16:00 PM

Enjoyable triolet. It's rhythmic rhyme is melodious just as the title represents.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/9/2024 8:50:00 AM

Delightful, Joseph:)

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 11/7/2024 11:23:00 AM

Hello Joseph, What is not to love about your Triolet? First of all, I have my first Masters degree in music, so coming to enjoy your poem was quite a delight. Autumn Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

Ink Empress

Date: 11/5/2024 9:48:00 PM

Dear joseph, i love this, so beautiful, and lyrical to the soul and heart, i love your wordplay here and how it flows so seamlessly. “ Nostalgic song in hearts remain” I agree and your choice of rhymes here are so profound and creative! Pleasure reading this gem~ sending you light always

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/5/2024 1:08:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. What a Great Ending. They sure do... Have a blessed day writing away...............

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/5/2024 5:31:00 AM

May we all enjoy the symphonies of the heart. It is exhilarating.