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The sun went down to a melancholy beat. Harmonizing with the day's waning deceit A motion was seen in the evening shadow. Nightfall triggered mystery and hallow. It could have been a superb writer. Setting a fascinating story's vibe insider As the wind tickled my flesh gently. An airy glow drew the moon intently. Coral jasmine blossoms in clumped form. I realize I'm in a peaceful, intriguing charm. A nostalgic ode to leisure and repose Wordsmiths retreat to tears and prose. Under the aesthetic Gulmohar tree. Where peace gently swings with glee. A place seemed the same as a safe haven. As balm for poets where hearts are driven. Only their tears could reach there. Boost poetic flow; the rack is bare.
Written: May 23, 2023

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Date: 5/24/2023 12:48:00 AM
creating an atmosphere, this si why poetry exists, this is beautiful and briliant, thanks
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Date: 5/23/2023 4:23:00 PM
A charming view of nature's beat after sundown. No wonder it inspired your poem.
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Date: 5/23/2023 11:44:00 AM
Hi Lasaad! There is so much beauty in your words as you find refuge under the serene umbrella of this "Gulmohar" tree - unfamiliar to me. Your poem is a journey from chaos to serenity ending in a "charm!" So well written. Enjoyed it very much. Blessings.
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Date: 5/23/2023 11:12:00 AM
- "Wordsmiths retreat to tears and prose" ... under the beauty of Gulmohar tree (never seen this tree before ... so colorful and beautiful ) - I enjoy this wonderful poem, Las :) - hugs
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