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Rhythm in my hand

One look from you puts rhythm in my hand for you to view You are the lifetime dream; I wanted to come true Your eyes are pure sunshine when my sky turns dark blue Even if it broke me, I would still keep falling for you 'Cause if shattered, you would repair me becoming my glue You're my hearts favorite beat; the muse it hears too The rock in life's river; that my soul flows across and through Divisible by none; holding hands, we stop being two

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Paige Hind

Date: 10/10/2024 6:19:00 PM

Lovely! "The rock in life's river; that my soul flows across and through"

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 10/10/2024 8:02:00 PM

A metaphor based on the passing of time and connections. Made within a simple life... of grand reflections. A.S.

Deb M

Date: 10/1/2024 12:15:00 PM

A beautiful tribute to the one you love AS! Tender and Romantic.....or were you talking to me?? Ha.!! Lovely... Debx

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 10/1/2024 9:31:00 PM

Thank you Deb, In a way it is to you ;) I find insperation often and deeply in love. I see it in the stars above. I see it in nature and the animals whom I care for, far and above. And yes also to the friends I have and have not met but still...... Love <3