Rhythm and Rhyme

Rhythm and Rhyme


When you make things rhyme,
It means you take the time,
To say what you need to say,
In a new and creative way.
So now I'm taking it day by day
to let my words come out and play,
So that when I read my poem,
Sweet thoughts I shall convey.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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artlyy Avatar
September 16, 2026 at 6:17 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly
Benoit Avatar
December 29, 2022 at 7:54 AM
Thank you kindly for your feedback and encouraging words of John 3:16! Have a great day! God Bless you too! 1JazzieGirl
Agustin Avatar
December 29, 2022 at 7:48 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you.
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