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Rhyming Hopes

The skies are dark late at night the days seem lonely too There is an empty space filled with cranky legs and a tired brain Gone are all the hopes and dreams and work I use to do Though I see the world is trembling filled with struggles and pain Its time to come back to the living world into the Cosmos’ creation Evolving at this stage advancing years in this elder generation Searching for working foreward and bringing hope again The world is struggling, creatures in need aim high with aspiration Hoping if only a small something fine will help in the worlds liberation Allowing me genuinely to feel fully alive in whatever years remain

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Date: 3/9/2021 10:12:00 AM
Your dream is my dream. Even though old age is crippling me with arthritis. But I wish I could go out of this house and enjoy life again.
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Linda Milgate
Date: 3/12/2021 2:54:00 PM
I am sorry you are having problems, arthritis can get really difficult and painful. I am glad that you are using some time for your poems. Some are very thoughtful uplifting and positive . I write to help work on my little brain to keep it working, due to some illness. I am sure others have their stories about how writing helps them as well as the readers. Take care look forward to what you write.

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