Rhyming

Something happens when I start rhyming it lies within my mind plagued with unwinding and every word displayed seeks another filleted from the secret muse am I infused or just confused ? It drives me crazy with the rhyming rush so many words to touch then hush. Does it ever go that with you when every ending word is spewed matching spell tweeking rhyme oh my, it lingers on the tongue twined. Help me, help me, PLEASE before rhyming subjects me to mental disease ever matching words floating on the breeze the mindless cloudy seas forever on my pen waiting release. please help me.

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B.E. Singer

Date: 2/17/2018 1:49:00 PM

Ye need not help...to quell, just read a "yelp!"

Mick Talbot

Date: 1/27/2018 5:22:00 PM

Inspired by your cry, your plea, I've composed this verse for thee. Hey, come on get it together, your rhyming sure is very clever. To write in rhyme poets endeavour, when needed or like whenever. Haiku, now that's different poetry, No need to rhyme to tell a story. What ever poetry form you choose, when from your heart you can't lose. Write on, pursue your desire, your rhyming sets hearts on fire! Best forever wishes, If knew better I'd send some XXX'es... Mick.

Dm Babbit
Date: 1/28/2018 10:03:00 AM

Thank you Mick, enjoyed your response. We ar all poets, we just may not know it/