Rhymes, They Never Leave Me

The rain's so good
It makes my mood
A heavenly gratitude
Continue, it should
Upon the rattling wood
As the duckling's brood
Soaked, I stood
Feelings elude
Under our hood
Enough food
No one rude
And no one misunderstood
Come out of your solitude
Rain, let there be no feud
Only love that's crude
Hope smile, we could :)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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November 8, 2024 at 10:18 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 28, 2016 at 8:22 AM
Sangam Giri, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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January 7, 2016 at 1:15 AM
Sangam, Enjoyed reading your poem, Forever ~SKAT~
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