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Rhymes In Pick Up Lines 1

Just passing by to say a sweet hi. You need not ask why and please don't tell me bye cos, If I say I do not fear that, I lie. I am ready to take up wings and fly reaching any heights no matter how high provided it will lead me to sing someday "you are my, my my" Your trade, I wanna ply your world, I wanna try. Whatever is the cost, I can buy and surely, you will have no reason to sigh cos I'm just a normal guy who, for you; is even ready to die.

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Date: 11/22/2013 12:18:00 PM
Smooth
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Funom Makama
Date: 11/25/2013 9:32:00 AM
Thanks Jon A
Date: 3/24/2013 9:34:00 AM
Wow, if a guy said that to me (or really anyone) I think I'd have to give it a try! That was amazing!
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/24/2013 12:35:00 PM
ohhhh Ashley.... Thanks a lot. If I were to be the one, nothing here would be a lie, not letting u pass by, until, together, we'll reach the sky..
Date: 6/11/2012 10:11:00 AM
Whoa...major persausive pick up lines, Funom? So coy, but perhaps effective? Would die for you...oie...could make one feel to run off? Best wishes...thanks for the comment on The Faeries.:) Best wishes, Mikki
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Funom Makama
Date: 6/11/2012 10:48:00 AM
Thanks Michelle

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