Funom Makama Poet Rhyme

Rhymes In Pick Up Lines 1

Just passing by
to say a sweet hi.
You need not ask why
and please don't tell me bye
cos, If I say I do not fear that, I lie.

I am ready to take up wings and fly
reaching any heights no matter how high
provided it will lead me to sing someday
"you are my, my my"

Your trade, I wanna ply
your world, I wanna try.
Whatever is the cost, I can buy
and surely, you will have no reason to sigh
cos I'm just a normal guy
who, for you; is even ready to die.

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Jon A Cavanaugh November 22, 2013 at 12:18 PM Smooth Funom Makama November 25, 2013 at 9:32 AM Thanks Jon A

Ashley Last March 24, 2013 at 9:34 AM Wow, if a guy said that to me (or really anyone) I think I'd have to give it a try! That was amazing! Funom Makama March 24, 2013 at 12:35 PM ohhhh Ashley.... Thanks a lot. If I were to be the one, nothing here would be a lie, not letting u pass by, until, together, we'll reach the sky..

Michelle Mac Donald June 11, 2012 at 10:11 AM Whoa...major persausive pick up lines, Funom? So coy, but perhaps effective? Would die for you...oie...could make one feel to run off? Best wishes...thanks for the comment on The Faeries.:) Best wishes, Mikki Funom Makama June 11, 2012 at 10:48 AM Thanks Michelle