Rhymer

we have to laugh at our bloody self, cant dodge the rhyme, do i need help, but then it aint a crime, me worry not himself, this time:) (i even think in rhyme?) Don Joe Flach i think we get the intuition of the mind, an flows the lines some sweet n kind, from other buggers sure, poets beyond deaths door, to lead the blind:) Dave Williams no brother you don't bore, i like the way you rhyme and fit, get to flow the words of wit, and i am bloody sure, no boring bit...

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/14/2012 6:19:00 AM

I am a expert to rhyme Don,you know that?(NO,SORRY I DONT RHYME WELL,JUST JOKING.you can ask Dan hwo good I am) lol- oxox love Anne-Lise

Judy Ball

Date: 2/14/2012 12:04:00 AM

I loved this Y'all. A great joint effort. Cute as a button. It left me with a smile on my face. God Bless, JB Been gone for awhile because my puter got sick and had to go to the puter hospital.

Joe Flach

Date: 2/13/2012 4:23:00 PM

I suffer from the same disease; a rhyming brain abnormality.

Don Johnson
Date: 2/13/2012 4:29:00 PM

i think we get the intuition of the mind, an flows the lines some sweet n kind, from other buggers sure, poets beyond deaths door, to lead the blind:)

David Williams

Date: 2/13/2012 4:23:00 PM

Don I wouldn't worry about the rhyme, to me your doing damn well fine, me I think it keeps in time, your poems are, just sublime...David

Don Johnson
Date: 2/13/2012 4:32:00 PM

no brother you don't bore, i like the way you rhyme and fit, get to flow the words of wit, and i am bloody sure, no boring bit...