Rhyme Time Iii: Death and Love

The casket is lowered slowly into the earth Destined to this moment even before birth Never understanding life for what it's worth Only to have a chance to still be alive Only to have a chance thy will to survive Letting life continue its catastrophic dive Now right here on death's door I arrive Why couldn't I choose to remain with you here Instead of being a corpse still full of fear Only if I could kiss you once again my dear If only I would've seen everything more clear Now forever dropped into the underground Buried under life now eternally bound Consciously unable, a voice without sound Everything I lost in all the nothing I've found Unfinished life quest of love and happiness As I watch you my love now cry in distress A better man I should've been this I confess I love you my dear, Godspeed, and God Bless Heart no longer beats but still breaks as you cry Why God did you not let us say goodbye Receiving no answers and getting no reply On final descent my tears fall from the sky The casket is lowered slowly into the earth
12/07/17 Written for contest: "Rhyme Time III" Hosted By: Laura Loo
Won 1st Place in Contest Results
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Talbot Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 11:05 PM
A big CONGRATULATIONS on your win Brian. Wishing you and your's much success and happiness in 2018, Mick
Davey Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 4:49 AM
Thank you and Happy New Year
Roper Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 7:55 PM
Nicely done, Brain, it tears in my heart. Congratulations on your win! Merry Christmas and God Bless Hugs Eve ~`*
Davey Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 11:47 PM
Thank you Eve and Merry Christmas
Allison Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 4:53 PM
Beautifully penned and so very sad i can see why Luloo loved this one, many congrats on your win Brian:-) Merry Christmas and a Happy new year:-) hugs jan xx
Davey Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 11:47 PM
Thank you Jan and Merry Christmas to you too
Scars Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 10:47 AM
wow Brian, you really got me with this one...sadly beautiful and exactly what I was looking for. thank you and congrats :) -luloo
Davey Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 1:18 PM
Thank you Laura whata wonderful X Mas present for me
Gondolf Avatar
December 15, 2017 at 3:22 PM
Brian, this is such a beautifully written sad poem, enjoyed reading it. Best of luck in the contest. John
Davey Avatar
December 15, 2017 at 4:27 PM
Thank you very much John
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