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Rhyme Time Iii - Christmas

RHYME TIME III - CHRISTMAS

The unique shape of each frosty snowflake,
tapping on the window, as cookies bake.
I can smell the buttery sugar and Winter break,
Grandma’s batter creamed with sunny yolks.

Old-fashioned buggies arrive carrying folks.
The horses shake with bells and ladies’ cloaks,
as snow thickens on branches of old-timer oaks.
Broad smiling and busy hands, carrying platters -

turkey, ham, and fixings with holiday clatter.
Such a peaceful time where only love matters.
Blissful, ruddy faces with winsome chatter.
Kids tugging on Santa’s whiskers to test

if he is daddy or Uncle John. So blessed
by a red velvet bag, gifting the best,
and yet there in the crèche- a beloved guest.
All bow their heads for the thanksgiving prayer,

remembering the spirit of one so rare.
A star that led shepherds and magi to share
a moment with the savior, who created with care
the unique shape of each frosty snowflake.

12/12/2017
Laura Loo’s Rhyme Time III Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Scars Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 1:05 AM
perfect for this time of year dear Kim! thank you and congrats :)-luloo
Rodrigues Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 7:29 AM
Thank you, Luloo! Hugs Kim!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 10:36 PM
Congratulations, Kim on your fine win.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 7:29 AM
Thank you, Subimal! <3
Allison Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 5:32 PM
you painted such a delightful Christmas scene Kim:-) Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 7:26 PM
Thanks so much, Jan!
Tripp Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 11:56 AM
Congratulations my Dear, on a fine win.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 12:44 PM
Thanks so much! :)
One Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 12:54 PM
It is like you took me there with your words, like a christmas card.. well written Kim...
Rodrigues Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 1:15 PM
Thank you so much, Silent! <3
Pandit Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 7:44 AM
A magnificent poem of festive joy among family and friends--you did this well Kim--your poem is a joy to read--this poem must win!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 7:48 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay! <3 :)
Gondolf Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 4:33 AM
Kim, I really enjoyed your wonderful depiction of a family Christmas celebration. Best of luck. John
Rodrigues Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 5:33 AM
Thank you, John! :)
Godwin Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 2:11 AM
Absolutely gorgeous. You took me to Tara, Rockwell, Kincade (sp?, Thomas), books and movies - the whole Holiday montage of early, successful American families, then transported me on, so smoothly to the night of Jesus' birth. The feel truly took me, delighted and in Jesus, awed me. Love this ... CayCay
Rodrigues Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 5:35 AM
Thanks so much CayCay! Your comment made me smile! <3
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