Rewired

subtle depth of sadness speak of tides, within the water true an tried, thoughts splatter like tomato sauce Dolphin’s stagger off to hide, love will return of course. Love cannot be denied, Love’s subtle intercourse, Rewired… .....Don Johnson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Maverick Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 12:30 PM
Loved the undercurrents in this one Don..)
Treetop Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 2:45 AM
Love cannot be denied truer words never spoken! Good verse mate!
Sivey Avatar
February 4, 2012 at 10:40 AM
Soft spoken, I don't think so, right to the point with Don! When I got to tomato sauce I had to chuckle my friend! You know that has to be a humorous part of the write! "...Rewired" Awesome line there! Great Work!!
Williams Avatar
February 4, 2012 at 10:02 AM
Don too true mate. love cannot be denied..Dave
Roberts Avatar
February 4, 2012 at 8:26 AM
nice one Don
Horsman Avatar
February 4, 2012 at 6:33 AM
like the imagery here Don. enjoyed. harry.
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February 4, 2012 at 5:38 AM
Bravo Don, thank you for reading Dan + my poem.OXOX love Anne-Lise
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