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Rewired

subtle depth of sadness speak of tides, within the water true an tried, thoughts splatter like tomato sauce Dolphin’s stagger off to hide, love will return of course. Love cannot be denied, Love’s subtle intercourse, Rewired… .....Don Johnson

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/10/2012 12:30:00 PM
Loved the undercurrents in this one Don..)
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Date: 2/5/2012 2:45:00 AM
Love cannot be denied truer words never spoken! Good verse mate!
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Date: 2/4/2012 10:40:00 AM
Soft spoken, I don't think so, right to the point with Don! When I got to tomato sauce I had to chuckle my friend! You know that has to be a humorous part of the write! "...Rewired" Awesome line there! Great Work!!
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Date: 2/4/2012 10:02:00 AM
Don too true mate. love cannot be denied..Dave
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Date: 2/4/2012 8:26:00 AM
nice one Don
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Date: 2/4/2012 6:33:00 AM
like the imagery here Don. enjoyed. harry.
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Date: 2/4/2012 5:38:00 AM
Bravo Don, thank you for reading Dan + my poem.OXOX love Anne-Lise
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