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Revolver

Return the innocence you took, afraid, we were, to even look, so paranoid of being mocked, revolver in your hand half-cocked. Without a compass, lost at sea, destruction was our destiny, time and time, left alone, with just the scent of your cologne.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/11/2009 10:26:00 AM
I just love this onethe opening line is a great hook..it kept me in the piece.....wonderful writing.
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