Revolution of the Mind
REVOLUTION OF THE MIND
visionary
&surprising
a phenomena
transitioned
to the threshold
in remnants
of atmosphere
glimpsed
simultaneously
within
reach
unfettered
unconscious
a concept
deranged
yet bound up
& peripheral
doubt
coexists
devoted
chaste
yet unleashed
induced
to disturb
&reproduce
THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE without grammatical symbols the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and respond thus making the form a two way interplay and often a unique interpretation by the enigma so derived
Copyright © Brian Strand | Year Posted 2022
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