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Revoke Her Passport

There's a passport I would like to revoke from one person who thinks it's a joke to repeatedly make fun of fellow writers. Like a pugilist, she calls us 'prizefighters.' What harm if we enjoy entering contests? That doesn't prove whose poetry is best because one person's opinion has weight and another says it's open for debate. If she's trying to deflate anyone's intellect, she won't do it with a weapon of disrespect. I applaud people who bravely try a new form They're not afraid to write out of the norm. She stabs with a pen, trying to draw blood while sitting on her toosh like a couch spud. We don't write to be popular. She's wrong, but lord, she keeps howling the same ol song. She claims we want attention and a high profile, but her posts draw attention in words that defile. I've never understood why her eyes get glazed over contest entrants who should be praised. She dares write of grace and having humility but complains vehemently, and with hostility. Her PS passport should be revoked & shredded as punishment for being rude and hardheaded.

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Date: 12/6/2022 9:23:00 PM
People like that are insecure and are just craving for attention for themselves but doing it in a roundabout way. Sounds like another customer for the 'hill` lol. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/6/2022 11:22:00 PM
I'd second your motion in a heartbeat, Tom. Soup mail
Date: 12/6/2022 2:42:00 PM
Here in Brazil we call your poem "slap with gloves", that is, when someone, in an elegant way, puts the opponent in the right place.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/6/2022 3:11:00 PM
Thank you for such a kind way of phrasing a put down, Marco. I truly appreciate your thoughts.
Date: 12/6/2022 2:36:00 PM
I certainly do agree, Jenna. I've nothing more to say, except poets of good faith and intentions should shut off this troll, who persists in belittling and criticizing others here on the site.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/6/2022 3:09:00 PM
Yep, that’s true. I just read another comment that disagrees with us.

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