Revived

The roar I heard before ever I arrived Tempting and enticing this place had been described Closer I could feel a gentle spray upon my cheeks From deep inside excited sounds emerge as squeals and squeaks This force from Mother Nature now appears before my eyes Such joyfulness to witness wondrous gifts that she provides Now in a trance I lay supine her gift envelops, I'm in her arms This heavenly feeling so divine seeps into my body and into my mind Immersed within her power as she gently swamps my soul To restore my equilibrium Revived ~ I am now whole A place to go when I feel low A secret kept No one must know Written 13th September 2019 Contest: Picturesque Rhyme Sponsor: Eve Roper Contest Strand Pick G Sponsor Brian Strand HONORABLE MENTION

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/13/2019 12:29:00 PM

Loved this Ann, could hear the roar and feel the mist on my face. Hope all's well. Tom

Ann Gilmour
Date: 9/13/2019 12:57:00 PM

Thank you so much Tom always appreciate your comments and I hope you can enjoy the sunshine forecast for this weekend. It is a stunning evening here and I am awaiting the harvest Moon tonight, Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/13/2019 11:30:00 AM

WOW! It felt like I was in the midst of nature.. in the serene tone and flow of your poem, Ann. A superb write..a joy to read.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 9/13/2019 11:37:00 AM

Gosh, such wonderful comments dear Vijay and I thank you so much. To hear that from such a talented poet as yourself is amazing! Thank you again Vijay. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/13/2019 8:55:00 AM

It sounds perfect. What a great entry for the contest.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 9/13/2019 11:04:00 AM

Thank you so much Richard for your lovely comments and I truly appreciate your visit. With kindest thoughts Ann xx