Revived

The roar I heard 
before ever I arrived
Tempting and enticing 
this place had been described

Closer I could feel 
a gentle spray upon my cheeks
From deep inside excited sounds  
emerge as squeals and squeaks 

This force from Mother Nature 
now appears before my eyes 
Such joyfulness to witness 
wondrous gifts that she provides

Now in a trance I lay supine 
her gift envelops, I'm in her arms
This heavenly feeling so divine
seeps into my body and into my mind

Immersed within her power
as she gently swamps my soul
To restore my equilibrium 
Revived ~ I am now whole 

A place to go when I feel low
A secret kept 
No one must know 

Written 13th September 2019

Contest: Picturesque Rhyme
Sponsor: Eve Roper

Contest Strand Pick G
Sponsor Brian Strand
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Tom Cunningham

September 13, 2019 at 12:29 PM

Loved this Ann, could hear the roar and feel the mist on my face. Hope all's well. Tom

Ann Gilmour

September 13, 2019 at 12:57 PM

Thank you so much Tom always appreciate your comments and I hope you can enjoy the sunshine forecast for this weekend. It is a stunning evening here and I am awaiting the harvest Moon tonight, Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Vijay Pandit

September 13, 2019 at 11:30 AM

WOW! It felt like I was in the midst of nature.. in the serene tone and flow of your poem, Ann. A superb write..a joy to read.

Ann Gilmour

September 13, 2019 at 11:37 AM

Gosh, such wonderful comments dear Vijay and I thank you so much. To hear that from such a talented poet as yourself is amazing! Thank you again Vijay. With kindest thoughts Ann xx