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Revival 2 Point Ohh

Admittedly a little bit of me can see I have an ability missing ambition to mission living submissively in submission, If I believe built into me a skill too free up my sleeve capability I'll gift to me a victory, I certainly need to live assertively to see what's served to me I deserted life unreservedly through hurt I didn't deserve to see, now I sit thirsty to spawn a new morn the old me worn by society reborn I've sights to see and writes to read words to rhyme emotional ink to bleed I need a trip to get to my feet bin a fool no more defeat, my heartbeat thumps pumping desire exercise eat rhyme and sleep inspired a discipline medicine for a menace inclined to fire, So goodbye to a tired mind the dire times and being too uptight to unwind I'm sending a reminder that I'm wise and wild with will to mile up the clock dial and drive a revival that'll rock hip roll and hop as tongues tangle lips then rive I'm alive dropping jaws and ruling the kop, Evidently I show ability that a bit of me could see by my own admission I mission with ambition push what kills me wilfully into submission with a skill full of fuel as I roar with a pure poetic passion sure to endure war, I'm going gung-ho I'll let the gun blow I aint done no until I say so I've got sayings to sow when I lay they go woah ink the words in the row as I show off and show why to throw me the doe I can row the boat slow fly high dive low don't underrate bro and belittle or bellow as my bow and arrow will hit you I'm hallow I'll take in the takings like a baker with dough rhyme baking and making it rise up and grow win prizes through flow as I fly like a crow, Could it be these single syllables are only good for simple silly fools and simply stupid individuals who sin and sit all cynical while I sing with awe so clinical reaching toward the pinnacle as I am unstoppable flying untoppable ideals I'm phenomenal I feel this is probable an honoured untouchable tactical poet incredibly abled to powerfully show it a milk teat flow like mad cattle merits me sick n' bad in battle, I'm superb at survival I thrive like an idol entitle to revival that's typed as the title my pen is my rifle my rhyme's a trifle stand tall like the Eiffel broad wall like I'm tidal and fill every eyeful until I go viral and to my arrival when all see I rule Admittedly I've brilliantly shown my ability an ignition, an ambition me on a mission beyond my revival alive unrivalled skill THRIVE I WILL!

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Date: 12/21/2018 6:39:00 AM
The improved version is so much tighter! It’s so dense with rhyme that half way through, my brain did a full 360 rotation, and given that this deserves a good couple of reads to catch it all, I’m now tripping! Also I’m quite jealous of the time you must have had writing this! When’s the single released? <- wow I sound about 77 saying that!
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Date: 12/21/2018 11:58:00 AM
…...it's okay 77 is the new 68 ha ha ha ha, the single will be done when I'm happy with an instrumental, cant decide atm lol, still got a headache from writting this lol
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Date: 12/21/2018 11:57:00 AM
lol thanks, yeah I've read it quite a few times and am yet to fully digest it, tbbh most of the rhymes were written at the same time, I write random 1 and 2 liners all the time.. lol... my head is jealous you dont have time like me lol
Date: 12/16/2018 9:30:00 AM
Nice one Nick, cool rhyming!
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Date: 12/16/2018 9:33:00 AM
Thank you very much Gordon :) Wishing you and yours a very merry christmas