Jslambert Mister Roboto Poet Rhyme

Revisited--Dead Weight :--Short Version

All stones corresponding on this earth
You bet have met some friction
Embrace and accept for what it’s worth
Instead of treating it as an affliction

Each and every breathing life, 
must come to an instant end.
Eliminate dead weight with a knife
and roll with genuine friends.

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John Aaron Green June 22, 2011 at 8:14 PM with one breath we must be relentless,,,,super poem,,,,i loved it....

Andrea Dietrich June 18, 2011 at 5:38 PM wow, I love that last line,be a rolling stone, man, and roll with genuine friends. You really got that right, my friend!

Poet Destroyer A June 16, 2011 at 6:39 AM wow! JSL., you have a point here,, and accepting,,, all things for what is it,,, invites.. all good.. nicely pinned,..p.d.

James Foulk June 14, 2011 at 8:04 PM yes i will check it out thank you for commenting on The Old School Yard.

Carol Sunshine Brown June 14, 2011 at 12:15 PM I have enjoyed reading your fasinating poetry today JS. Wishing you a beautiful week filled with inspiration. Thank you for your always kind comments. They are very much appreciated. Love, Carol