Reverse Polarity

Why does my consciousness get swiftly corroded?
Why my conscience finds itself in contradiction?
Why with strange thoughts, words, and actions mind get loaded?
Why betwixt likes and dislikes there's constant friction...?

Soul soft, as a gentle tender breeze gets soon swayed,
The spirit within, by cares and worries, is hauled;
Cracks in the axle of awareness make verve jade,
My senses, like birds and beasts, in slavery, stalled...!

This is, hence, I have decided to cleanse myself,
All that is making me drown in the sea of dread,
Should be shed and the soul should become a fresh shelf,
Wherein humanness should its motherly wings spread...!

In a bodiless, celestial space now I swim,
All that entrapped me, like a hunter's net, are gone;
Desires defeated heart and mind possess no whim,
Cleansed of all pitch dark clouds I see a dazzling dawn...!

Renunciation and detachment have been born,
And have started dwelling in me, making me light;
Indifferences, like dust in the gale, are blown,
My bond with each being has become rightly tight...!!!

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Date: 7/28/2023 6:42:00 AM
Brilliant masterpiece, Chris. Heartiest congratulations on your triumphant win in the contest, which you undeniably earned.
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Date: 7/26/2023 9:25:00 AM
Such a deep philosophy made simple and smooth to absorb in your stream of poetic words, very comforting...dazzling creation
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/26/2023 9:06:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 7/25/2023 11:51:00 AM
Chris, this is a wonderful flight into leaving behind all that inhibits from stepping into the shoes of others and walking with them. Quite a lovely write! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings on your journey!
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Date: 7/26/2023 9:06:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 7/21/2023 1:37:00 PM
I so agree with you Chris there is no yours and ours or me and you, just we for we are all made in the image of God and so I Along with you reverse polarity. So well described and said. Hugs and blessings Jennifer
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/21/2023 6:20:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
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