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without love we are alone, i know the feel right here, the others heart has turned to stone, taste of love's revere, lonesome's taste is *****. Don

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Date: 2/20/2012 3:51:00 PM
Yes, I agree with everyone, it is a sad but wonderful write Don! You don't usually write sad poem so when you do I pay attention! And thus i noticed the great ingenuity you have achieved with this piece! I really enjoyed this poem this afternoon my friend! Excellent Work!!
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Date: 2/20/2012 1:14:00 PM
Good write, Don. Love, Kim
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Date: 2/20/2012 8:53:00 AM
Hey we don't get a lot of sad ones from you, but at least you know you are never alone here and we all love you Don...Dave
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Date: 2/20/2012 8:36:00 AM
thanks for sharing have a nice day ~always *P.D.
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Date: 2/20/2012 8:05:00 AM
lonesome's taste is queer is fantasticly descriptive. I tasted it reading...thanks Patrick
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Date: 2/20/2012 5:22:00 AM
Sad one Don, sad but nice xx
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