Revenge of a Broken Heart

What if i dissapeared
and was gone forever
Would you even see?
or even remember
who i was to you
and what you were to my heart
you said that we were through
thats when i fell apart
you left my remains
bloody and torn
unaware of my pain
your words like a thorn
and how i recover really depends
if i finish what you started
or if i get revenge.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
September 23, 2011 at 2:30 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Gabby. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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September 21, 2011 at 5:55 PM
It's so uplifting! :)
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