01/23/24
Dark Nursery rhyme A-N-D Eye Rhyme
Sixth place
Premier Contest by Hilo Poet
No. 1982
Contest by Brian Strand
REVENGE Avenge ! Revenge. Malice: Stabbed thrice. Done crime. Yes. Prime. Brutal. Fatal. Blunder . Murder. Crisis ! Police. Hurry ! Query. Witness. Court case. Going prolong. How to predict ? What’s the verdict ! Life term ? Less harm. Fourteen years in prison ! Fate : clean. Or, hence sentenced to death. Last breath !
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