Revelations


                     a splash in the pool
                 a summer day of ripples
                        cool revelations

Heidi Sands

6/26/24

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Wolf Avatar
June 27, 2024 at 8:27 PM
Oooh! 'Cool revelations' really works for me, Heidi. Great Haiku here. Thanks, gw
Sands Avatar
June 27, 2024 at 9:34 PM
That is good to hear. Thank you . Goodnight :)
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June 27, 2024 at 9:43 AM
Your Haiku is revealingly cool my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Sands Avatar
June 27, 2024 at 10:16 AM
Thank you Jennifer. Blessings :)
Rodgers Avatar
June 27, 2024 at 6:38 AM
Dear Heidi, I love haikus and how they express so much in so few words. Yours made me think about the heat of the sun and the relief of the water, and yet, how they go hand-in-hand. Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Sands Avatar
June 27, 2024 at 6:48 AM
Hi Daniel. Thank you for your kind comment :)
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