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a splash in the pool a summer day of ripples cool revelations Heidi Sands 6/26/24 (C)opyright

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Date: 6/27/2024 8:27:00 PM
Oooh! 'Cool revelations' really works for me, Heidi. Great Haiku here. Thanks, gw
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/27/2024 9:34:00 PM
That is good to hear. Thank you . Goodnight :)
Date: 6/27/2024 9:43:00 AM
Your Haiku is revealingly cool my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/27/2024 10:16:00 AM
Thank you Jennifer. Blessings :)
Date: 6/27/2024 6:38:00 AM
Dear Heidi, I love haikus and how they express so much in so few words. Yours made me think about the heat of the sun and the relief of the water, and yet, how they go hand-in-hand. Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/27/2024 6:48:00 AM
Hi Daniel. Thank you for your kind comment :)
Date: 6/27/2024 5:39:00 AM
This was the order of the day for many during last week's heat wave. Nice haiku Heidi
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/27/2024 6:04:00 AM
Yes! For sure. Thank you Tom :)

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