Revelations

a splash in the pool a summer day of ripples cool revelations Heidi Sands 6/26/24 (C)opyright

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/27/2024 8:27:00 PM

Oooh! 'Cool revelations' really works for me, Heidi. Great Haiku here. Thanks, gw

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/27/2024 9:34:00 PM

That is good to hear. Thank you . Goodnight :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/27/2024 9:43:00 AM

Your Haiku is revealingly cool my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/27/2024 10:16:00 AM

Thank you Jennifer. Blessings :)

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 6/27/2024 6:38:00 AM

Dear Heidi, I love haikus and how they express so much in so few words. Yours made me think about the heat of the sun and the relief of the water, and yet, how they go hand-in-hand. Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/27/2024 6:48:00 AM

Hi Daniel. Thank you for your kind comment :)

Tom Woody

Date: 6/27/2024 5:39:00 AM

This was the order of the day for many during last week's heat wave. Nice haiku Heidi

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/27/2024 6:04:00 AM

Yes! For sure. Thank you Tom :)