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Revelation of Day

Through the gloom of night, The sun pushes through blackness: Birthing a new day.

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Steve Edmonds

Date: 4/21/2010 11:29:00 PM

Like the way you chose the thought of birthing a new day.

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 4/21/2010 12:50:00 PM

LIne 3 has distibction. Thank you for your contests! I enjoy them, they are unique and challenging and I am always intrigued by your photos! Where do you get them or do YOU take them?! I am humbled to even be considered and for that, I can only say..Thank you, Raul. Gerard.

John Freeman

Date: 4/20/2010 6:22:00 PM

Like a miracle, which is only the paranormal pushing through the veil of what we called the normal. Awesome imagery in this Haiku. Raul I wanted to personally thank you for placing my poem in your contest. It was appreciated very much. Agape, Moses

Rick Parise

Date: 4/20/2010 2:59:00 PM

Each day anew!!~~~NICE~~~ Rick Parise~~~Blessings to you and yours

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/20/2010 12:43:00 PM

This is lovely, raul. Did I tell you thanks for my win in the still life? I still can't remember! LUv ya, andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/20/2010 10:01:00 AM

~~Magnificent Birth~~ here Raul. What a beautiful Haiku. Thank you for my placement in your Still Life contest it was such an honor to be included with so many wonderful poets. Love, Carol

Kim M

Date: 4/20/2010 7:58:00 AM

Nicely conveyed, Raul. With the birth of any form of life, there is hope for happiness and everything sweet in its maturity. With the warmth and strength, love and energy of this mother's nurturing and influence, there is promise that the enfant's future will be blessed with vigorous growth to flourish in becoming a great thing of beauty, which will radiate the light contained within itself upon all witnesses. This is the truth revealed to me this morning while watching your sunrise. Thank you.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/20/2010 7:15:00 AM

Thankxxx for a wonderful photo for Still Life and congrats to all your winners.. although "Anticipation" did not place I enjoyed writing for this photo and thankxxx for the opportunity to constantly create new poetry..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/20/2010 4:21:00 AM

I stil love your work even though my senryu did not place, Raul. Your talent amazes me!!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/20/2010 12:07:00 AM

I can feel that Sun pushing...exploding in a new Sunrise..awesome...Charma

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/19/2010 1:39:00 PM

And aren't we glad...I didn't know if it would happen earlier this morn but the sun did drive the clouds away...But we need rain so either way it had to be a great day...Keep the creative pen flowing.Sara