Revelation of Day

Through the gloom of night,
The sun pushes through blackness:
Birthing a new day.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Edmonds Avatar
April 21, 2010 at 11:29 PM
Like the way you chose the thought of birthing a new day.
Keogh Jr. Avatar
April 21, 2010 at 12:50 PM
LIne 3 has distibction. Thank you for your contests! I enjoy them, they are unique and challenging and I am always intrigued by your photos! Where do you get them or do YOU take them?! I am humbled to even be considered and for that, I can only say..Thank you, Raul. Gerard.
Freeman Avatar
April 20, 2010 at 6:22 PM
Like a miracle, which is only the paranormal pushing through the veil of what we called the normal. Awesome imagery in this Haiku. Raul I wanted to personally thank you for placing my poem in your contest. It was appreciated very much. Agape, Moses
Dietrich Avatar
April 20, 2010 at 12:43 PM
This is lovely, raul. Did I tell you thanks for my win in the still life? I still can't remember! LUv ya, andrea
Brown Avatar
April 20, 2010 at 10:01 AM
~~Magnificent Birth~~ here Raul. What a beautiful Haiku. Thank you for my placement in your Still Life contest it was such an honor to be included with so many wonderful poets. Love, Carol
M Avatar
April 20, 2010 at 7:58 AM
Nicely conveyed, Raul. With the birth of any form of life, there is hope for happiness and everything sweet in its maturity. With the warmth and strength, love and energy of this mother's nurturing and influence, there is promise that the enfant's future will be blessed with vigorous growth to flourish in becoming a great thing of beauty, which will radiate the light contained within itself upon all witnesses. This is the truth revealed to me this morning while watching your sunrise. Thank you.
Sweetheart Avatar
April 20, 2010 at 7:15 AM
Thankxxx for a wonderful photo for Still Life and congrats to all your winners.. although "Anticipation" did not place I enjoyed writing for this photo and thankxxx for the opportunity to constantly create new poetry..luv.. "Sweetheart"
Culverhouse Avatar
April 20, 2010 at 4:21 AM
I stil love your work even though my senryu did not place, Raul. Your talent amazes me!!
Chircop Avatar
April 20, 2010 at 12:07 AM
I can feel that Sun pushing...exploding in a new Sunrise..awesome...Charma
Kendrick Avatar
April 19, 2010 at 1:39 PM
And aren't we glad...I didn't know if it would happen earlier this morn but the sun did drive the clouds away...But we need rain so either way it had to be a great day...Keep the creative pen flowing.Sara
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