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tall thin and graceful
palm trees on a white sand beach
reach for orange skies

the day's elegance
is visible in a breeze
along beauty's path

white crested blue waves
ever searching like the wind
in a restless world

sun sits on the sea
in the cool tangerine hours
birds begin to sing

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Date: 10/2/2021 4:43:00 PM
The first haiku reminds me of ballet. Lovely images, dear Evelyn!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/2/2021 7:08:00 PM
I'm so pleased that you enjoyed it. Thank so much, Kim.
Date: 9/30/2021 9:50:00 PM
Once again Evelyn, your poetry is so visual, one can feel the words, and the images wonderful.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/1/2021 11:22:00 AM
That's so nice to know, Harry. Thank you very much.
Date: 9/30/2021 1:02:00 AM
Some brilliant long lived imagery in these hiku Evelyn
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/30/2021 10:36:00 AM
Thank you so much for the compliment, Brian.
Date: 9/29/2021 10:58:00 PM
A call for wake up and admire nature. Hugs.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/30/2021 10:39:00 AM
Birds give the call daily. Hugs.

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