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Revealing

The revealing rising sun Cast light 'pon the mist As it swirls between the hedge Stands proud in the midst Elongated dread lock gray clouds Decorate the blue sky As roosters crow against chilled air So still that crows don't fly Swollen buds upon the Oaks Long for spring's release Japanese Magnolia's leaves Leave as buds increase

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/31/2014 5:51:00 AM
Dear Sara: Thank you for the support my friend. Here's wishing you and your loved ones A Happy New Year filled with peace, joy and love. All my best wishes on the last day of 2014, Leon.
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Date: 12/31/2014 2:54:00 AM
A good observation packaged with fine expression,I love it ; happy new and rewarding 2015 Sara...huggs
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Date: 12/30/2014 10:22:00 PM
A really charming little poem, Sara! :) john.
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Date: 12/30/2014 3:25:00 PM
what makes this beautiful is the fine image of nature's charm.. how lovely, sara... wishing you a fine bew year!.. huggs
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Date: 12/30/2014 10:23:00 AM
Those rooster crows on the still air - love it. LOve, daver
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