Revealing

The revealing rising sun
Cast light 'pon the mist
As it swirls between the hedge
Stands proud in the midst  

Elongated dread lock gray clouds
Decorate the blue sky
As roosters crow against chilled air
So still that crows don't fly

Swollen buds upon the Oaks
Long for spring's release
Japanese Magnolia's leaves
Leave as buds increase
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Enriquez Avatar
December 31, 2014 at 5:51 AM
Dear Sara: Thank you for the support my friend. Here's wishing you and your loved ones A Happy New Year filled with peace, joy and love. All my best wishes on the last day of 2014, Leon.
Kayode Avatar
December 31, 2014 at 2:54 AM
A good observation packaged with fine expression,I love it ; happy new and rewarding 2015 Sara...huggs
Fleming Avatar
December 30, 2014 at 10:22 PM
A really charming little poem, Sara! :) john.
Onclaud Avatar
December 30, 2014 at 3:25 PM
what makes this beautiful is the fine image of nature's charm.. how lovely, sara... wishing you a fine bew year!.. huggs
Austin Avatar
December 30, 2014 at 10:23 AM
Those rooster crows on the still air - love it. LOve, daver
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