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Returning the Love That Was Losted

Returning the love that was losted From the two lovers who had love in each others eyes. To the time when they had their goodbye's When one still stood while the other denied the love As one night one began to cry But the sun shined more and more that day Only to find another in a very unusual way Returning the love that was losted He lays down thinking how he let her go She lays down thinking how I loved that boy ever so He says to his self I loved that girl with all my heart She says how can he love me by not showing his love for me Returning the love that was losted Even though she's gone and her sun will shine no more His light will no longer light only to find darkness Those two were a perfect couple they say He drove her away without ever showing that he really loved her She lefted him without saying goodbye only looking the other way with no remorse Returning the love that was losted

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Date: 12/26/2013 12:52:00 AM
Hi Warren, , Hope you are enjoying the holidays, -- Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT"
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Date: 12/22/2013 6:45:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Warren ! - Nice to read your first poem here. :)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - I wish you and your loved ones an enjoyable Christmas - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/22/2013 1:24:00 AM
Day by day my young friend.. day by day. God wants what is good. Love is good. Tomorrow is a very strong ord. what will happen? only heaven knows.. :) Cindy Lu
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Date: 12/22/2013 12:06:00 AM
Warren, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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