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Retreat

Francine Roberts Contest Name Short and Sweet Retreat Love was sweet, when you were here, though you are gone, an image dear, Is looked for here, my sweet, When I’m out on the street, Bitumen burns my feet, An Shiela’s think I’m *****, retreat.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/26/2011 6:23:00 PM
'reckon you're right enough Don..) just thought i'd wish you a happy one anyway..)
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Date: 12/26/2011 9:21:00 AM
There's gotta be a better way to find her Don. Love these sad ones, each has a story to tell and yours tugs at the heart. A great one for the contest!
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Date: 12/26/2011 1:13:00 AM
Well the Sheila's are queer if they think you're queer Don! I find you a real good mate! Hope it was a Good Christmas! Big Hug lizzie
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Date: 12/26/2011 12:39:00 AM
A very interesting poem and a sweet dedication! I enjoyed this tonight! Always, Laura
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