Retracing My Steps

Walking to school with my grandkids,
I realized my earring was gone,
So when turning around, I did scour the ground
For the mate to the one I had on.

I didn’t have luck, but persisted,
Retracing my steps once again,
When I suddenly spied, lying on the curb’s side,
My lost earring, well worth an Amen!

But I realized the bottom was missing,
For there had been a dangling part,
So I searched in the grass; not a minute did pass
‘Til I noticed it there, with a start.

Though I still have to fit them together,
Now my earrings are back as a pair
And I’m feeling quite proud my persistence allowed
Me to have such a story to share.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Brotherton Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 6:44 PM
I must admit, a day without the dangly part would make me sad.
Allison Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 3:33 PM
So glad your story has a happy ending. Nothing is more irritating than losing one earring. i was helping out at a church function, took off my scarf and my earring went ping and couldnt be found, it broke my heart as it was a pair of earrings sent to me by Carolyn Devonshire who was such a special friend to many on soup. hugs jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 3:14 PM
Glad you found all the parts!
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