Written, April 4, 2024 For The Contest, “Senryu's 3 Rhymed By 3 Unrhymed” Sponsor, Hilo Poet
sleeping in at will languishing in the new thrill no jobs to fulfill take a peaceful walk listen to birds tweet or hawk call a friend to talk retirement is fun working is dismissed and done rewards have begun yet there are those times of flashbacks to former days working long and hard missing the team-work in reaching a common goal pride shared when it's done but this was my past and good memories will do reap now the rewards
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