Retirement Homes

retirement homes
the doe and her yearling fawn
nibble the hedgerow
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Gentry Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 11:19 PM
Congratulations on your win.
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April 17, 2018 at 12:22 PM
Wonderful imagery. Gotta giggle, I had not thought of "hedgerow" in years and I used it too in my haiku, great minds! ;) xomo!
Allison Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 9:28 AM
Lovely imagery Deborah, many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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April 17, 2018 at 8:14 AM
- Congratulations, Deborah :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 8:06 AM
Congrats on your fine haiku, Deborah. Lovely image of now having time to enjoy the beauty.
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