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Retaining Faith

The sadness had been costing you sorrow.
That may daunt you, but it will not kill you.
It's just the ground, it is rather narrow.
The sadness had been costing you sorrow.
You could hear the rest of the tale morrow.
Much to say, but your heart still beating too.
The sadness had been costing you sorrow.
That may daunt you, but it will not kill you.

Written: March 05, 2023

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Sara Kendrick March 8, 2023 at 12:41 PM Well, the sadness can result in suicide which is not what we want for anyone. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Andrea Dietrich March 7, 2023 at 6:31 AM Sad, but so true of many's lives!!!

Joe Maverick March 6, 2023 at 12:39 PM Reminds me to remain dauntless, And doubtless..No less; more to be' From Gods Tri-unity, through you. Through me.' Creating more that Is to be.!

Paige Hind March 6, 2023 at 12:02 PM Deep work!!

Vijay Pandit March 6, 2023 at 5:41 AM It's hard to carry on when hurdles pop up. A powerful life message my friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen March 6, 2023 at 3:51 AM - Oh ... to never find joy...always be sad ... try to turn your mind to something positive ... never give up hope and joy :) - A sad poem, Las - hugs

Victor Buhagiar March 6, 2023 at 1:01 AM Death comes to everyone, but only when God wants it.