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I feel so deprived
By ensemble of clothing
Yours especially

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Jon A Cavanaugh

December 17, 2012 at 11:24 AM

I enjoyed this witty poem Rollo. Our dress does speak volumes. That is to say our spiritual dress. Outwardly, I prefer non-ostentasious casual dress, to cover the birthday suit that I was given. If I were deprived of that I would feel very uncomfortable.

Rollo West

December 17, 2012 at 11:28 AM

Hello Jon, I agree with you my friend on spiritual dress, and thank you for stopping by and reading my write. Rollo

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

December 17, 2012 at 11:19 AM

you always make me laugh with these little gems Rollo , thank you xx

Rollo West

December 17, 2012 at 11:26 AM

Hi Mandy, thank you so much for stopping by and commenting. Rollo

Len Gasun

December 17, 2012 at 11:10 AM

Hello, my very dear friend, Rollo! This is an awesome Senryu you've penned which i extremely enjoyed reading it. It's really restricted :)), Thumbs up for your great write! Thank you so much for sharing and the big smiles;). So much thanks also for your very inspiring comments on my poem. In fact, I'm not yet expert in Kyrielle but I tried. I hope I did it right for the first time. Again, million thanks and advance merry merry Christmas to you and your love ones! love and hugs, Leonora

Rollo West

December 17, 2012 at 11:13 AM

Hello my friend, and thank you for taking the time to read my write and comment. Hope you and your family have a safe and merry Christmas. Rollo

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