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I feel so deprived By ensemble of clothing Yours especially

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Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 12/17/2012 11:24:00 AM

I enjoyed this witty poem Rollo. Our dress does speak volumes. That is to say our spiritual dress. Outwardly, I prefer non-ostentasious casual dress, to cover the birthday suit that I was given. If I were deprived of that I would feel very uncomfortable.

Rollo West
Date: 12/17/2012 11:28:00 AM

Hello Jon, I agree with you my friend on spiritual dress, and thank you for stopping by and reading my write. Rollo

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/17/2012 11:19:00 AM

you always make me laugh with these little gems Rollo , thank you xx

Rollo West
Date: 12/17/2012 11:26:00 AM

Hi Mandy, thank you so much for stopping by and commenting. Rollo

Len Gasun

Date: 12/17/2012 11:10:00 AM

Hello, my very dear friend, Rollo! This is an awesome Senryu you've penned which i extremely enjoyed reading it. It's really restricted :)), Thumbs up for your great write! Thank you so much for sharing and the big smiles;). So much thanks also for your very inspiring comments on my poem. In fact, I'm not yet expert in Kyrielle but I tried. I hope I did it right for the first time. Again, million thanks and advance merry merry Christmas to you and your love ones! love and hugs, Leonora

Rollo West
Date: 12/17/2012 11:13:00 AM

Hello my friend, and thank you for taking the time to read my write and comment. Hope you and your family have a safe and merry Christmas. Rollo