Restoring Life

seams frayed and threadbare
rocking time till life to come
old clock once more chimes


4/1/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Andresen Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 2:59 PM
- Love the last line, Eve - Very well done ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 1:36 PM
Very nicely expressed Eve... best wishes
One Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 7:44 AM
Very deep Eve..
Pandit Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 6:54 AM
Well said,.. a thoughtful depiction, Eve.
Gauthier Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 11:29 PM
Delightful senryu, Eve.
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