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Restless March

RESTLESS MARCH the whispering breeze cats at the open window a strange restlessness just one patch of snow sun glancing off the roof tops sense the world turning just one patch of snow and not a cloud in the sky a restless sniffing rabbit on the run eagle at one thousand feet strange restless chatter oh such excitement not wild just restless twitching cats open window cats open window exciting restless silence be still aware now

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Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 6/18/2012 3:49:00 PM

Very clever haikus, Daver! That's one form I'm not good at.:( However you've got it down pat! Now about that fever, you are drinking lots of fluids, yes? You might have to see your doctor in case it's a bug you've picked up. Was wondering why I hadn't heard from you, thought you were exhausted from your visitors. Chicken soup can do you no harm. Oh, I'll worry about my guru friend.:( Keep well, Daver! Love, Mikki

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/13/2012 10:06:00 PM

Good evening Daver, Stopping by to wish you a beautiful Happy Mothers Day :-D I'm hoping God will hear my wishes and send my love too find many mothers in good health, and I pray he continues to give my mother the strength to fight everything her body is battling with right now, God bless~ xoxoxo PD

M. Hussain Effendi

Date: 3/15/2012 1:08:00 AM

Your poem speaks clearer than a picture could, ever. Very well written, sir. P.S. Thank you for your consistent visits too

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/14/2012 1:01:00 AM

I think you have done well in drawing attention in this write Daver,, and i had the sense of "aware while reading"

Nathan D.

Date: 3/13/2012 6:10:00 AM

be still aware now, like that line very cool ending

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/12/2012 2:36:00 PM

Well did the cats get out?...Enjoyed reading this one today..It is nice outside off and on..Weather not settled yet here..Seeing the eagle in flight and it be in person must be nice..Sara

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 3/12/2012 1:43:00 PM

I love cats and I love this set of Haiku's. You have described everything very well and I got cool imagery. Always, Laura