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Restless Curves

with you, I’ll wander
till your restless curves betray…
flooded path ahead

26 Aug 2014
One Solo EPIC Senryu or Haiku- River Walk Contest

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Charmaine Chircop

November 14, 2014 at 11:45 PM

An outstanding semryu :)

Teddy Kimathi

September 11, 2014 at 10:02 AM

I love the metaphor dyed in your haiku! Congrats to your win David!

Nette Onclaud

September 10, 2014 at 12:03 PM

a shower of congrats on your well-deserved award, david!.. too bad, i missed this contest.. huggs

Len Gasun

September 8, 2014 at 9:03 AM

Many warm congratulations on your win and this splendid senryu of yours my dear friend, david! Hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 7, 2014 at 5:22 AM

- David well deserved .... 2nd place !!! - Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: "River Walk" - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

September 6, 2014 at 10:42 PM

ooh la la, a splendid metaphorical one here. Congrats for your win. I love this one.

Maurice Yvonne

September 6, 2014 at 12:43 PM

you probably haven't heard but you won. Congratulations.

Faye Gibson

September 6, 2014 at 9:15 AM

David, I love the diverging thoughts this haiku brings. Great write. Congrats.

Brenda Meier-Hans

September 6, 2014 at 8:53 AM

Congratulations Dave. Well done Haiku.

Pandita Sietesantos

September 6, 2014 at 7:50 AM

Congratulations, David, on your great win! Well deserved with this beautiful senryu! Pandita

Jan Allison

September 6, 2014 at 6:52 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations David:-) Hugs Jan xxx

John Lawless

September 6, 2014 at 6:43 AM

nicely penned reminder that all endeavors have their perils.

Casarah Nance

September 5, 2014 at 11:17 PM

Very great! I dig it, well done on your win :)

Poet Destroyer A

September 5, 2014 at 11:15 PM

David :). Congratulations, on an awesome River Walk, Win:):):) Enjoy the smiles, and my blog, You're a "River Legend" if you'd like or have time. Always & Forever ~LINDA~