Restless

In the dentist's chair, I prayed for death.
tried not to breathe the dentist's breath,
the "laughing gas" didn't seem to work,
I felt his pliers twist and jerk.

I dreamt of a huge catastrophe,
an explosion at a refinery,
in Texas City many were dead,
nightmares rolling through my head.

I dreamt I was arguing with a man,
my oversoul, as I understand,
he said it was time for me to go
and I was pleading, no, no.

I'm falling apart, my right knee's shot,
I keep losing teeth from years of rot,
There's a spot on my nose that looks like cancer,
and I wonder if death is the final answer.


©copyright2009DanielleWhite
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 10, 2008 at 2:31 AM
Sounds like a really bad day! Super couplet rhyming and flow... extremely entertaining! Best wishes, Keith
Smith Avatar
December 8, 2008 at 12:46 PM
Cute.........and good as always. In His grip....By His grace.....Janice
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December 4, 2008 at 5:33 PM
Sometimes I think dentists get their jollies inflicting pain. When you are two feet in the air, suspended with your face contorted, he asks "Did that hurt?" NOOOOOOOOOOO! God Bless. Vince
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December 4, 2008 at 1:52 AM
Hi Danielle Quite a dream you had in that dentist chair. Yikes, scary stuff. Food for thought for sure.Hope the vision you had was a nightmare and not a preminision. I truly believe our dreams have the ability to get ourselves to ask those hard questions in life. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia
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