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Rest In My Embrace

Rest
In
My warm
tight embrace
A sweet surrender
Let my loving arms enfold you
There's no safer place to be, forever and a day
My darling, listen attentively to my heartbeats and marvel how they beat for you


CONTEST 580,any form,any theme upto max of 8(E I G H T ) lines 
Sponsored by Brian Strand (Winner: 3rd Place)
Date written and posted: 03/13/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 27, 2019 at 1:47 AM
Congratulations, Edward on your win with this captivating verse.
Ibeh Avatar
March 27, 2019 at 5:55 AM
Thank you so much, Subimal:-)
Dhaka Avatar
March 14, 2019 at 3:28 AM
Awww! that's so cute.
Ibeh Avatar
March 14, 2019 at 2:57 PM
Thank you, Aditi!:-)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 13, 2019 at 8:36 PM
So sweetly said, Edward!
Ibeh Avatar
March 14, 2019 at 2:57 PM
Thank you, Kim!:-)
Gauthier Avatar
March 13, 2019 at 5:46 PM
Very lovely fibonacci, Edward.
Ibeh Avatar
March 13, 2019 at 7:23 PM
Thank you, Line!:-) Pleased you liked it!
Sands Avatar
March 13, 2019 at 4:17 PM
Very nice Edward! :)
Ibeh Avatar
March 13, 2019 at 4:27 PM
Thank you, Heidi!:-) I appreciate it.
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