Zach Aurel Henderson Poet I do not know?

Response To Smile

Finally something to make me smile
Even if it is only for awhile

Something to make me look forward to the day
Even though i must fight to hear it say

Something to change me 
Something i look forward to see

Something to tilt my world upside down
To make me smile and no longer frown

Im smart so ill hold on to it
Hopefully it feels the same, if only a little bit

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Carol Sunshine Brown September 23, 2009 at 8:57 AM Your poem seems to say I do not trust this love. Why waste your time and hers if you have no trust. Love, Carol

Autumn Page September 22, 2009 at 5:24 PM hmm interesting. I like it. Autumn

Sara Kendrick September 22, 2009 at 4:39 PM Third couplet is especially meaningful. Keep writing. Sara

Brooke Knox September 22, 2009 at 3:30 PM To hear it say?