Archana Garg Poet Rhyme

Response To Potpourri

No lamps needed as sun headed
     For its visible all around,

Death and life are certain and rife
  'Tis no end but only a pause.

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Date: 19/01/2016
For the contest: RESPONSE TO POTPOURRI
By: nette onclaud
( Quote - 4 from Rabindranath Tagore... 
"Death is not extinguishing the light;
It is putting the out lamp
because a new dawn has come")

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Poet Destroyer A February 4, 2016 at 7:27 AM Thank you for the reply

Poet Destroyer A January 31, 2016 at 9:48 PM Archana, Congrats on your POETIC RESPONSE win. Luv - Linda - Archana Garg February 4, 2016 at 6:41 AM Thank you Linda, for appreciation.

Kim Merryman January 26, 2016 at 11:19 AM A profound statement! Congrats on your 1st place win, Archana! Love, Kim Archana Garg January 27, 2016 at 3:01 AM Thanks for appreciation..

Paul Callus January 25, 2016 at 9:56 AM Hi Archana....your response to this potpourri contest is indeed a lovely one, especially the end line. Congratulations on placing first! // paul Archana Garg January 27, 2016 at 2:59 AM Thank you Paul for your kind words.

Richard Lamoureux January 25, 2016 at 9:48 AM Congratulations on your top spot!

Geetika Mangla January 24, 2016 at 11:33 PM thoughtfully written. Congrats dear. Keep it up. Big smiles for you. Archana Garg January 25, 2016 at 2:45 AM Thank you my dearie. Huggs.....

Faye Gibson January 24, 2016 at 3:34 PM Very well done; congratulations on your top position! Archana Garg January 25, 2016 at 2:47 AM thank you.......

Balveen Cheema January 23, 2016 at 7:00 PM Congrats on your awesome placement, Archana! Archana Garg January 24, 2016 at 2:23 AM Thank you so very much Balveen.

Andrea Dietrich January 22, 2016 at 9:18 PM Congratulations to you, Archana. Archana Garg January 24, 2016 at 2:22 AM Thank you so very much Andrea.

Skat A January 22, 2016 at 7:22 PM Archana, Congratulations on your awesome win. Love SKAT Archana Garg January 24, 2016 at 2:22 AM Thank you so very much Skat A.

Nette Onclaud January 22, 2016 at 2:45 PM beautifully handled; the imagery of a pause got me... big congrats and thanks for being part of my contest, archana...huggs Archana Garg January 24, 2016 at 2:03 AM Thank you Nette, for throwing such an interesting contest. All the four quotes were worth writing. Once again thank you for being so generous while judging.

Andrea Dietrich January 20, 2016 at 8:20 PM you chose one of my favorites of the four quotes. Nicely done.

Manny Paras January 19, 2016 at 10:33 PM Man, this is a real fantastic poem. I think you wanted to say " IT'S ?" Thank you for sharing this one!

Lyva Marty January 19, 2016 at 10:14 AM Goodness, I hope you win ! You made me forget to breathe.