Jajosh Ongado Poet Rhyme

Response To Potpourri

Gazing at a star, near and far

I embrace the glow within---

Once uncertain of my own reign,

The self now honors its brave light.



A Poetic Response Contest
Sponsored by nette onclaud
Quote # 1: " The stars are not afraid
to appear as fireflies."
Dated 1.18.2016

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Poet Destroyer A January 31, 2016 at 9:52 PM jajosh, Congrats on your POETIC RESPONSE win. Luv - Linda -

Kim Merryman January 26, 2016 at 11:29 AM Well done, Jajosh! Congrats on your placement in the contest! Love, Kim

Paul Callus January 25, 2016 at 10:05 AM Congratulations, Jajosh, on your placement in this response to the potpourri contest...a clever take! // paul

Faye Gibson January 24, 2016 at 3:42 PM Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest.

Balveen Cheema January 23, 2016 at 7:20 PM Love it Jagjosh! Congrats on your well deserved placement!

Skat A January 22, 2016 at 7:24 PM Jajosh, Congratulations on your awesome win. Love SKAT **

Nette Onclaud January 22, 2016 at 2:55 PM i was inspired by the final homecoming of the self; well depicted, jajosh..big congrats and thanks for being part of my contest...huggs

Skat A January 19, 2016 at 12:37 PM AWESOME POEM..............SKAT

Daniel Turner January 18, 2016 at 7:20 AM Very nice. Good luck in the contest.