David Mohn Poet Verse

Response To Potpourri

We’re more I trust, than cosmic dust,
     The patterns sing in whispered songs.
          The butterfly’s sweet lullaby;
          A rhapsody of notes, re-sung

                    ~16 Jan 2016~

                        Quote #4
 
      "Death is not extinguishing the light;
             It is putting out the lamp
          because a new dawn has come"

       For the contest, A Poetic Response,
               sponsor, nette onclaud

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Poet Destroyer A January 31, 2016 at 9:53 PM david, Congrats on your POETIC RESPONSE win. Luv - Linda -

Kim Merryman January 26, 2016 at 11:35 AM Beautiful imagery and well expressed! Congrats on your placement, David! Love, Kim

Paul Callus January 25, 2016 at 10:27 AM Very beautiful, David...quite a unique take on this poetic response! Congratulations on a most worthy win. // paul

Faye Gibson January 24, 2016 at 3:47 PM David, this is simply beautiful; I always enjoy reading your work. Congratulations.

Balveen Cheema January 23, 2016 at 7:15 PM David, I just love those musical words! Congrats on your well deserved placement!

Skat A January 22, 2016 at 7:24 PM David, Congratulations on your awesome win. Love SKAT **

Nette Onclaud January 22, 2016 at 3:02 PM wonderful paean so languid and deep, david...huge congrats and thanks for being part of my contest...huggs

CayCay Godwin January 18, 2016 at 10:19 AM A most lovely and lyrical entry. I like it. Good luck in the contest ... CayCay

Jan Allison January 17, 2016 at 1:38 PM Beautifully penned David good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx