Respite

Focused, brows furrowed Working, toiling, laboring Then, my child awakes.

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Estela Canama

Date: 2/9/2017 2:45:00 AM

A wonderful poem! Keep on writing, Ely. God bless!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/21/2016 9:24:00 PM

nice little write, Ely. LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/15/2016 9:29:00 PM

Ely A, I like every line of your poem above. Thank you for sharing. ** SKAT **

Duncan Chappell

Date: 10/29/2010 4:28:00 AM

excellent peace here my friend

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/24/2010 2:35:00 PM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ely. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/23/2010 9:50:00 PM

Very interesting way to describe the child at sleep, Ely. I enjoyed this one. LUv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/23/2010 10:19:00 AM

Nice Senryu with great images, Ely