Respite

Focused, brows furrowed
Working, toiling, laboring
Then, my child awakes.

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Beata Agustin

December 11, 2024 at 9:35 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Estela Canama

February 9, 2017 at 2:45 AM

A wonderful poem! Keep on writing, Ely. God bless!

Poet Destroyer A

March 21, 2016 at 9:24 PM

nice little write, Ely. LINDA

Skat A

January 15, 2016 at 9:29 PM

Ely A, I like every line of your poem above. Thank you for sharing. ** SKAT **

Duncan Chappell

October 29, 2010 at 4:28 AM

excellent peace here my friend

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 24, 2010 at 2:35 PM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ely. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol