Respite

the comforting silence
of the mountain cabin
welcomes her back…
away from it all
she lets down her hair

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Andrea Dietrich

May 5, 2026 at 10:24 AM

Reading this one again. Love it still. I think I may have seen all your poetry!

Paul Callus

May 7, 2026 at 7:52 AM

Thank you for revisiting, Andrea! I must find time to publish more of my work on Soup :) I'm so busy helping out others that I hardly find time to do my own things! Regards // paul

Charles Messina

September 17, 2025 at 4:34 AM

Really nice, Paul. Yes, indeed...I can too almost see her with her long hair...Hope you are well, my friend. Regards, Charlie

Maria Williams

September 1, 2025 at 7:17 AM

Dear Paul,this feels like a deep breath of peace — I could almost hear the silence of the mountains and see the gentle moment of freedom as she lets her hair fall. Simple, serene, and so comforting...Hugs

Paul Callus

September 2, 2025 at 1:10 PM

Thank you dear Maria. It was meant to be simple and understandable; enough to project a feeling of lingering peace as relayed by the long flowing hair once let down. ~ Warm regards, my friend // paul

Andrea Dietrich

August 26, 2025 at 9:22 PM

Wonderful and soothing, Paul

Paul Callus

August 29, 2025 at 2:30 PM

Thank you, Andrea. Many of us, at one time or the other, feel the need to seek silence and peace of mind away from the din of everyday life. Of course, I can't literally let down my hair :) // paul